1. Lead: Two firemen seriously injured and one man
dead after tragic accident
Nut Graph: After speeding through an
intersection and striking a dispatched fire engine, Charles R. Lydon was killed
on impact at approximately 7:10 this morning.
2.
Lead: Go big or go file a claim/ Small cars
smashed on highway
Nut Graph: According to a study by the
Highway Loss Data Institute, an affiliate of the Insurance Institute for
Highway Safety, shows that smaller cars are 30 percent more likely to file
injury claims and repair losses.
3. Lead: Hot dogs no longer G-rated
Nut Graph: According to the Journal of the
American Medical Association, hot dogs prepared in bite size pieces are among
the most dangerous foods to children and result in death once every five days.
4. Lead: Shocked, grieving relatives informed wrong
body buried at funeral
Nut Graph: After experiencing the shock of
losing Kristine Belcore, 51, to a heart attack last week the family receives
yet more shocking news; the wrong body was buried at the funeral in which more
than 100 were in attendance.
It looks like your writing headlines and not leads.
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